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Author Topic: Tryin to write four lines  (Read 1195 times)

Gurjit_K

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Tryin to write four lines
« on: September 13, 2012, 11:57:16 PM »
pathar di dunia vich tu v pathar banja dila.. :-?

jna khana tenu thokar mar chala jnda.. (confused)

to be continued lol (clap)






Sukhdev sukh

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Re: Tryin to write four lines
« Reply #1 on: September 14, 2012, 08:43:23 PM »

Pardesi Parinda

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Re: Tryin to write four lines
« Reply #2 on: September 29, 2012, 02:52:23 AM »
i wrote these lines lol.. (biglaugh) (band)

Sukhdev sukh

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Re: Tryin to write four lines
« Reply #3 on: October 07, 2012, 10:50:55 PM »
Expiry wali howe tan dawayi mardi
bharawa vich watt di ladhayi mardi
fukre nu thodi jehi jhadayi mardi
bacheyan nu aukhi jo padhayi mardi
te mitra nu suit di,,,
mitra nu suit di kadayi mardi

Gurjit Kaur-USA

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Re: Tryin to write four lines
« Reply #4 on: October 09, 2012, 09:01:45 PM »
gud :)

Sukhdev sukh

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Re: Tryin to write four lines
« Reply #5 on: October 10, 2012, 10:19:33 AM »
fashion diyan pattiya ne...
punjabi suit pave koi na......
eh kahdiya jattiya ne..

(Mr. M b s)

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Re: Tryin to write four lines
« Reply #6 on: October 15, 2012, 03:07:33 PM »
« Last Edit: October 16, 2012, 03:14:57 AM by Mr. M B S »

Gurjit Kaur-USA

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Re: Tryin to write four lines
« Reply #7 on: October 16, 2012, 09:37:30 PM »
thanks MBS (fly) (fly) n ur lines are also gud (goodjob)

khush

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Re: Tryin to write four lines
« Reply #8 on: October 23, 2012, 06:35:50 PM »
 (goodjob)